This is a little piece of art I spent about three and a half hours working on this afternoon. It is far from done because I think the right half of the picture is too bare compared to the left side of the graphic. So, here is where you guys come in. Please comment on my photo and tell me what I can do to fix it.
Here is a link to the picture:
http://s70.photobucket.com/albums/i84/proverbialsaint/?action=view¤t=thecycleoflife.jpg&newest=1EDIT: I just updated the previous picture, which is the link before this one. Compare and contrast the pictures, please.
This is the new picture:
http://s70.photobucket.com/albums/i84/proverbialsaint/?action=view¤t=thecycleoflifecopy.jpgIf you still like the first picture better, the following are a list of ideas I tossed around in my head before making the second picture. Tell me which one of them you like and how I could incorporate that idea better than I actually did, if you think I can do a better job than I already have.
A) Find a person with a very pale outfit and stick her somewhere on the right side.
B) There used to be a bench that the girl on the left was sitting on. It is now a dark blob. Extend the bench and work in another figure sitting against the right side of the pole.
C) Do nothing.
D) Just stick some stars in somewhere on the right side and use them as navigation if this turns into a layout.
E) Find a way to do something to the brown pole in the middle that will tie both sides together.
F) Other and explain why.
The theme of the photo is day turns into night. None of the pictures were drawn except for the girls, who are courtesy of two very nice artists on boyis.com, plus a lot of my own filtering. The other shapes were created using various filters.
EDIT: Decided to turn this into a banner of some sort that I can use for a layout. A third time of day has been added to the front of the photo. The girls are still the only drawn images.
http://s70.photobucket.com/albums/i84/proverbialsaint/?action=view¤t=asingleday.jpg
