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Sir Lirin
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Erm... I've got Poems! Crits welcome!
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July 16, 2008, 11:05:31 AM »
Yeah, this one I like the idea to, but I want to make it better! Help?
"Absolutely No Title Whatsoever"
Life forms are tiny pockets of low entropy that create disorder (high entropy)
I like Entropy
I like being it
I like causing it
Let us all create chaos
Like the sciences say we do
Rather than fight it,
For unlike what they say,
It is the refusal to create chaos that seems to be unnatural.
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July 16, 2008, 11:09:17 AM »
i likey. YAY CHAOS!
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Yay! Someone likes it!
Um, does it sound like I'm trying to be too deep? That's the one thing I'm worried about.
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Not really.
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Yay!!!!!!!
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